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Not bad, but how is this druggy?

I don't really get this song. It sounds fairly normal to me. I don't hear anything really out of the ordinary except for maybe a choice in instruments. Essentially everything has an "anticipatory" sound. Nothing really feels random or unexpected, or presented in an extraordinary or disgusting way.

Best of luck with the contest. It sounds great, but I really don't see how this'll fit all that well in this contest...

-FTA

Nice work!

Even for making an attempt at dubstep, this isn't bad. I recommend you search GirlStep for help on creating dubstep. You can find her on Newgrounds, Facebook, or YouTube.

If you're still using FL Studio, she'll be your go-to-girl for mastering the craft. Hopefully you'll be wobble-bass'n like never before!

-FTA

Strange...

For a brain on drugs, a nice effect seems to be some well focused piano playing. Initially thought it was going to be imaginary lyrics until I heard the voice.

Not sure what it means to be "on blow", but this really is somewhat random and unusual.

-FTA

JPRixdorfer responds:

Thanks for the review! Short answer: unusual? Maybe. Random? No. My thought was that this kind of music best represents the smugness of your average cokehead. And you can bet your hiney you are well focused after a couple of lines :D

Needs moar trippay-ness

Please? The last 10 secs or less were rather nice.

-FTA

Atlas responds:

Like I said to SCTE3 I loved the last part and was going to just make something with that but decided to make this instead.

Somewhat false advertising...

...at least in my head, because for some reason when I saw the title I thought it was a play on Det. John Kimble's (Kindergarten Cop) quotes "Take your toys back to the carpet!" and "There is no bathroom!"

Other than that, this is a nice mix u got here. Smooth and spontaneous!

-FTA

DjHexor responds:

Huh... Never thought about that but you're totally right. John Kimble is boss.
I was thinking of the pun "Does the carpet match the drapes?" when I came up with the name.

Thanks for your review aswell.

Nice and random...

This sounds pretty good. The drums start off basic, though I do think that when everything starts to get crazy, I think it'd be nice to hear the tempo of the drums change or hear them sound a bit more distorted.

Other than that, nice stuff. Dangerous? I believe the idea behind this competition was to actually play with fire, take big risks, get your hands dirty!

Keep doing, what you're doing.

-FTA

Trippy, Game-y, Rhythmic sweetness!

For a WIP, I really like where this is going!

The direction you chose seems to have a classic chip-like feel to it, which is nice.

The change of rhythms and/or time signature that occured halfway in the song were a sweet transition, keeping the listener on a ride of unexpected twists and turns.

Keep up the wonderful work on this. Everything sounded rather clear as well, no need for much audio tweakage.

-FTA

Well thought out!

This is certainly the perfect song to wake up to at 6 in the morning (about the time I wrote this review).

It feels very trippy and creepy, especially the begiinning and end.

The slow down at the end gives off some odd impressions, like as if you've actually been killed in your helll, or you're getting a big dose of your own medicine from when you were among the living, and you pass out....perhaps indefinitely.

The rhythm sounds spot on, and really sets the mood of feeling punished and rejected by all that is good.

I somehow feel that even Dante himself (of Dante's Inferno), wouldn't feel comfortable pressing on, if this was heard in the first circle of hell.

Overall, this is an awesome example of a ZOMGWTFBBQHELL industrial song.

-FTA

OrphenFire responds:

Dante would probably shit bricks if this were what he heard in Hell. Although, the song wasn't really about the Judeo-Christian place of torment, but rather a state of being within one's own mind too terrible to imagine. Thanks for the review (:

Am I the only one...

....that thinks of "The Matrix" when I hear this song?

This is smooth

For some reason, I'd liken this song to a beautiful jazzy version of Da' Truth's N.F.L. (New Found Love).

The lyrics from the aforementioned song in some way kind of dance around the idea of a girl who's heart is hard to permeate, though it's not exactly what the song's about. It's perhaps a message that both the guy and the girl need to have strong, pure hearts in order to have a truly loving relationship.

Love the strings, btw.

-FTA

Just a person that one day looks forward to making music for games.

Christopher Shaird @FaeryTaleAdventurer

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Joined on 11/21/10

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